efforting (13 March 2011)

2 May

what an effort to hold you
in a certain light and way

how you fall short
every time


4 Responses to “efforting (13 March 2011)”

  1. brokenpenwriter May 7, 2011 at 4:53 pm #

    Where were you ten years ago, when I finally began to accept that the man I married was the wrong one? Perhaps if I’d read this, my eyes would have opened sooner.

    Stunning in simplicity, but then, truth always is.

    • squashedmosquito June 7, 2011 at 10:59 pm #

      Ah yes. I think I may have much the same story playing out. Thanks for your kind words. Xx

  2. Jingle May 9, 2011 at 4:33 am #

    cute, powerful one.
    well done.


  3. Jingle Poetry May 10, 2011 at 10:08 am #

    how is your day?

    Glad to discover your poetry talent,
    Hope to see you join our poetry potluck today,
    1 to 3 random poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome in case you fall short in doing a theme fitting piece.
    Bless you.
    Keep up the excellence.

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